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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Thu Jan 03, 2008 12:42 pm
The reason I like this story, and was happy to become involved with it even in such a small way, is the conclusion. With a straightforwardness and simplicity Adrahil's grief is given outlet, his melancholy resolution, his love redeemed. The author's uncomplicated and sweet treatment of this small but momentous turn is wholy appropriate to something so true.
 
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LadyBluejay

Joined: 03 Feb 2005
Reviews: 126
Location: UK
Wed Jan 09, 2008 4:10 pm
I have written much about Lothiriel but never thought much about her grandfather. So its great to see this. Well done.LBJ
 
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MedeaSmyke

Joined: 15 Sep 2008
Reviews: 18
Location: Great Lakes, US
Sun Sep 28, 2008 5:46 pm
This was very sad and very cute.
 
Author's replied on Sun Oct 05, 2008 11:34 am
Thank you. It's loosely based on my own grandparents. I'm not sure why, but once Adrahil's character came into my head, I just loved him to bits.
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