Reviews for "Brothers"

Mon Nov 24, 2003 12:46 pm

This story and your Iadel tale have me wishing you'd turn the whole years-of-the-trees into a narrative. You have a gift for writing Valinor, and for writing these glorious characters. Do you have a longer fic elsewhere? Just curious; I'd love to sink into this narrative voice for a while.

Sat Dec 13, 2003 10:57 pm

This is excellent, Tinni. I don't know how I let this one get by me before. It's good to see a glimpse of the decency in Feanor.

Thu Apr 15, 2004 5:48 pm

Aaaaaaw that was so sweet. It's really nice to see another side to the relationship between the sons of Finwe. I never really realised that Feanor had to be a full adult by the time Finarfin and Fingolfin where born. I think you wrote a very sweet, although short (write more, hint, hint Very Happy smiley face

)story.

Isilme

Mon May 10, 2004 11:42 am

Wonderful and bittersweet! Unique, it offers a whole new perspective! Very Happy smiley face

Tue Sep 28, 2004 3:41 pm

I enjoyed this! It was interesting to have a glimpse of Fëanor at such a young age, and Finarfin is one of those characters that you really want to know more about. The picture you've drawn is very plausible, though slightly sad.

--Rose

Fri Jun 17, 2005 6:22 am

Very nice! I am not much on the earlier elves, but this makes me want to delve a little deeper into the past. There is only one thing I found: "but than again it was so hard not to like Arafinwë. " 'than' should be 'then'. Otherwise, this was a great read and a nice diversion. Thank you for sharing.

Wed Apr 04, 2007 7:57 am

I thought this was very sweet. And I too noticed that Feanor had the most problems with Fingolfin rather than Finarfin.

Tue Oct 23, 2007 4:25 pm

I love this little story, so cute and well written!

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