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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Fri Jan 25, 2008 4:00 pm
The details are sparkling: red velvet, gemmed scabbards and such. I'd like to see a little more about this far-future world, though. Right now it doesn't feel 10,000 years from now; it feels like yesterday at a costume party. For instance, how does a ship last 10,000 years? Has it been rebuilt and rebuilt again? Does it have "modern" conveniences, like laser-guided canons and microwave ovens? What does 10,000 years of living grant Capt Jack, other than another chance to look at Elizabeth?
 
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catseye1769
Joined: 21 Dec 2009
Reviews: 1
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Mon Dec 21, 2009 4:50 pm
Hello,
I really think this story has a lot of potential. It makes you wonder what happened during the ten thousand years and why Jack wants her so bad. Please update soon.
Catseye
 
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