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elea24

Joined: 20 Aug 2007
Reviews: 12
Location: UK
Sun Jan 20, 2008 4:44 pm
Oh, that was simply brilliant! I laughed myself silly at the end; almost out of relief that poor Boromir wasn't being attacked in battle (although I suppose he was being attacked in some respects Wink smiley face ).

You have proved once again that your are the queen of the drabble. Nothing is superfluous nor is it lacking in detail. Just lovely vivid imagery and a great twist at the end.

Bounce smiley face <-- What I'm doing right now.
 
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
Mon Jan 21, 2008 11:07 am
Absolutely hilarious. I kept trying to figure out what was scaring him. That was excellent. It's amazing how you convey so much in so few words.
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Mon Jan 21, 2008 1:48 pm
Funny. Classy. Wonderfully written. Thanks a lot for sharing Very Happy smiley face
 
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Sat Jan 26, 2008 7:32 pm
HAHA! Very fun. Well done and a fun twist.
 
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vladazhael

Joined: 16 Dec 2005
Reviews: 147
Location: Gone mad, back later
Sun Jan 27, 2008 10:10 pm
Oh, I can just see the barely concealed look of panic! (I get the same look at wedding receptions. Wink smiley face) Very nicely done.
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Tue Jan 29, 2008 12:20 pm
Bwahaha! I suspected that he was watching dancers, but I wasn't certain of it until the last line. Excellent! I can totally see Boromir having this sort of reaction.
 
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Haleth

Joined: 27 Sep 2003
Reviews: 96
Location: The ruins of Tharbad.
Sun Feb 10, 2008 8:01 am
Poor Boromir! He'd rather fight a batallion of orcs than dance.
 
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Lizbit
Joined: 03 Mar 2004
Reviews: 8
Location: Canada
Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:11 am
NB,

This was really cleverly done! I loved it, and could just picture the look of pure terror on Boromir's face! Well done!!!

Lizbit Very Happy smiley face
 
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