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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004
Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
Sun Jan 27, 2008 7:54 am
What an interesting chapter! The conversation between Arwen and Elladan is very thoughtful and well-written, and I look forward to seeing more of this story.

Well done!

- Barbara
 
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brindlemom2
Joined: 12 May 2006
Reviews: 56
Location: New York
Mon Jan 28, 2008 1:15 pm
An interesting beginning to a rather ignored part of their relationship. I will be watching to see where it goes. Well written and flows very well. Captures the inner core of the characters well.
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Tue Jan 29, 2008 12:19 pm
The voices were in key, very Tolkien. The whole mood is soft, and even the urgency hinted at in the dicussion of Choice failed to alter that soft, dreamy mood. I think this is appropriate for a conversation between elves. HIgh-quality writing, nice voice. Shall be on the lookout for future chapters to see where this story is going.
 
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