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eiranae
Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
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Thu Jun 19, 2008 1:26 pm
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| I can't wait to find out what happens next! Cliffhangers are so bittersweet. Great chapter. |
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
Reviews: 110
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Tue Jun 24, 2008 6:15 pm
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| Wow, I just found your story and I have to tell you that I really enjoyed it. You add amazing detail to the characters and their motivations. I liked the interactions between Eowen and Lothiriel and the slowly developing romance between Lothiriel and Eomer. Nice job with so many complicated characters. Keep up the great work. |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Mon Aug 04, 2008 3:15 pm
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| I have just read the most recent chapter - what a good weaver of tales you are, throwing Theodred in as a possible husband, I look forward to the next chapter greatly. |
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JediJenny
Joined: 20 May 2005
Reviews: 7
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Sun Aug 17, 2008 9:25 am
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| Another great chapter. I hope that the wait won't be that long for the next one. I truly love this story. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Aug 18, 2008 1:24 pm |
Hello JediJenny,
I know this chapter was a bit long in coming. Sorry about that, but I was away on holiday last week! It's good to hear you're still enjoying the ride.
Lia |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Tue Aug 19, 2008 3:42 am
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I finally managed to catch up on this story - took me long enough! Sometimes I do dislike holidays lol.
This is such a wonderful story! You really have me hooked. It was sad to read about Theodred's death, even though Tolkien himself wrote about it...still, the prince was a good man. A good leader. And now the clouds gather as Saruman unleashes his hordes...the drama! XD
Can't wait to read the next chapter! |
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| Author's replied on Wed Aug 20, 2008 8:04 am |
Hello Malinwen,
I feel sorry for Théodred, too. Actually I'm glad that it was Tolkien's idea to kill Théodred off - otherwise I would feel guilty! And yes, things are about to heat up, so that should be interesting.
It's good to hear you're still enjoying the story and thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Wed Sep 10, 2008 8:45 am
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Amazing few chapters!
Again, took me a bit to get back to this one, but I love the way things are going! I wonder how Lothiriel will explain things to Eomer, but I think they all have to survive first. And I have a bad feeling about that cave she's going to... |
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| Author's replied on Fri Sep 12, 2008 12:20 pm |
Hello Malinwen,
well, I think it's actually best to read several chapters at once or even the whole story (but that would mean a long wait!). And you are of course right to worry about that tunnel and that they have to survive the battle first... Let alone get the chance to talk!
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Mon Sep 29, 2008 2:25 am
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| Whew, that was in the nick of time! You had me gripping the edge of my seat back there. I'm very pleased that Eomer hurried up. Lol. B-u-t...now comes the somewhat explaining part. Ugh. I really hope he won't be too angry for too long, Lothiriel was only trying to help! *pokes Eomer* Again, brilliant chapter, I loved the suspense, you build up tension wonderfully! Can't wait to read more! |
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| Author's replied on Wed Oct 01, 2008 9:58 am |
Hello Malinwen,
yes, Lothiriel will have a bit of a difficult time explaining what she was doing rescuing mongrels  Also she's still suffering from shock, so she doesn't quite realise just why he is so angry with her. And I like writing action scenes, so it was nice to smuggle one into this story. Good to hear you enjoyed it!
Lia |
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
Reviews: 110
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Wed Oct 08, 2008 3:58 pm
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| Oh how fortunate that Eomer showed up in time!!!! Their reactions are quite beleivable - especially Eomer's anger and how Lothiriel got sick, who wouldn't after what almost happened. Great chapter. 'Look forward to more! |
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| Author's replied on Thu Oct 09, 2008 10:56 am |
Hello Athena,
Yes, I feel it's a very natural reaction to get angry when you've been frightened by somebody you love. And poor Lothiriel has been through a lot, but at least she has found out that Eomer still cares for her, which might prove to be a sort of turning point.
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Fri Oct 10, 2008 12:12 am
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Awwwwww Eomer was scared! These two are so adorable <3
Can't wait for more! |
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| Author's replied on Fri Oct 10, 2008 2:21 pm |
Hello Malinwen,
adorable? Hmm, I'm not sure if Lothiriel would call his behaviour adorable But at least she's found out that he's not completely indifferent to her.
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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candylouwho
Joined: 11 Jul 2006
Reviews: 32
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Wed Oct 22, 2008 8:25 am
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| Yay! That was so good! When will he know the truth? You're torturing us......but I love it! |
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| Author's replied on Thu Oct 23, 2008 9:40 am |
Don't worry, he'll find out...eventually. And I know I'm torturing my readers here, but I promise to update regularly.
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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