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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu Oct 23, 2008 12:34 am
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| Ah, the kiss! I've been waiting to see when it will come to pass. Poor Lothi and Eomer, they've still got so much to go through! I really do hope Eomer's stubborn nature won't get in the way too long! Yet again though, another brilliant chapter! |
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| Author's replied on Thu Oct 23, 2008 9:43 am |
Yes, I thought Lothiriel deserved a kiss before Eomer rides off to war, although they did not have the time to talk over their problems. But I just did not think that the Eomer of the Pelennor Fields acts like a man happily in love.
Thanks for reviewing, it's good to hear you enjoyed the chapter!
Lia |
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
Reviews: 110
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Sun Nov 02, 2008 4:51 pm
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Wow, how did I miss a chapter. Oh, well, what a pleasure reading two today. Eomer and Lothloriel could not have a more dramatic parting. Amazing. Also, quite an excellent way to deliver the news of how the events played out in front of Minis Tirith.
Love your story! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Nov 04, 2008 3:41 pm |
Hello Athena,
I wasn't sure how to have Lothiriel receive the news from Gondor, since to the reader it's already known, so I hit on this form to make it a bit more interesting. And a dramatic parting might lead to a dramatic reunion...
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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candylouwho
Joined: 11 Jul 2006
Reviews: 32
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Mon Nov 03, 2008 2:42 pm
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The whole thing was so exciting. I probably held my breath from the half way point til the end! MORE EOMER PLEASE ! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Nov 04, 2008 3:43 pm |
I'm really pleased to hear you held your breath, even though you knew the news the messenger was bringing! And there might be a tiny smidgeon of Eomer in the next chapter.
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Thu Nov 13, 2008 3:55 pm
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| Hmm - this could be something of an 'oops' moment... |
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| Author's replied on Fri Nov 14, 2008 3:10 pm |
LOL. I'm sure that is what Lothiriel is thinking, although she is trying to carry it off.
Lia |
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brindlemom2
Joined: 12 May 2006
Reviews: 56
Location: New York
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Mon Nov 24, 2008 3:46 pm
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| At last I have time to add a comment. RL has kept me lurking for some time but I have continued to follow your story and continue to enjoy it emensely. You continue to write very believable characters and create situations that lend themselves to a real life picture. Looking forward to more on this delightful couple! |
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| Author's replied on Wed Nov 26, 2008 10:29 am |
Hello Brindlemom,
it's nice to have you back! I'm pleased to hear you like my characterisation - after all this time of writing about them, the two feel almost alive to me. And they most definitely have developed a mind of their own.
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Mon Nov 24, 2008 3:49 pm
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Hmm - if I'd been Lothíriel I'd have wanted to hit her ladyship with a clog too.
Mating horses might cause her to faint, in the river with any luck!! |
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| Author's replied on Wed Nov 26, 2008 10:32 am |
Hello curiouswombat,
that's a thought - the problem is that Eomer might feel obligated to rescue her since it's his stallion that's causing the spectacle! I think hitting her with a clog is the better option 
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
Reviews: 110
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Mon Nov 24, 2008 9:14 pm
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| Wonderful chapter with so many great interactions! Ah, now Lothiriel can converse nearly fluently in Rohirric. Most excellent. I especially liked her interactions with the other soldiers and with her brother. And she can now hold her own with those snooty ladies of the court. I hope the next chapter will be up soon.... you've tantalized us with hopes of Eomer/Lothiriel. Is it soon to be? |
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| Author's replied on Wed Nov 26, 2008 10:40 am |
Hello athena,
it's probably even a bit of a surprise to Lothiriel, how much better she fits in with the Rohirrim than the Gondorians by now. And for the moment Firefoot has stolen the show, but perhaps Eomer will take a leaf out of his book... I'll try to be quick with the next update!
Thanks for reviewing.
Lia |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Wed Nov 26, 2008 1:58 am
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| *giggles* I love Firefoot at the moment. And I really really like the way you pictured the Rohirrim's horses - true warsteeds! Maybe now, finally, Lothiriel will get a chance to talk to Eomer. He really needs an eye-opening lol. Great job! Looking forward to more. |
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| Author's replied on Wed Nov 26, 2008 10:49 am |
Hello Malinwen,
yes, I agree that Eomer needs a bit of a push. But perhaps Firefoot's example might provide just that. After all, at the moment this 'stupid animal' is a lot more successful in getting what he wants than his master...
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Thu Dec 04, 2008 12:32 pm
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| Hurrah! Hurrah! Does happy dance! So glad they've sorted their misunderstanding out! |
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| Author's replied on Fri Dec 05, 2008 2:57 pm |
Hello curiouswombat,
I thought it was time for these two to sort out their differences and get back on track for their happy end. They deserve it!
Lia |
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brindlemom2
Joined: 12 May 2006
Reviews: 56
Location: New York
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Thu Dec 04, 2008 12:37 pm
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| Just caught up with the story. You continue to be an excellent weaver of tales. this is a favorite pairing of mine and I like your characterization of both of them. Looking forward to more action! |
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| Author's replied on Fri Dec 05, 2008 3:03 pm |
Hello brindlemom,
thank you for your kind words! I've come to like this pair too, though they can be temperamental and prickly at times (and have a mind of their own). There won't be all that much more action, just a few more hurdles for them to take before they reach the happy end.
Lia |
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