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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Fri Mar 14, 2008 8:01 pm
So cool! I think this is the first game fic I've ever read, and lord knows I play enough games. You totally got the game-playing rhythm down here. I could almost see the FPS world there. Good job!
 
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dolarabee

Joined: 22 Apr 2003
Reviews: 35
Location: Sydney, Australia
Sat Mar 15, 2008 6:57 am
Too true, Viv.

DEC, you certainly captured the ambiance! I can smell it. Poor John.
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Sun Mar 16, 2008 11:41 am
Very evocative, Dec. The scariest thing about walking in water is what you can't see, and you capture his unsure footing very well here without ever spelling it out.
 
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RJLCyberPunk

Joined: 16 May 2004
Reviews: 12
Location: Ponce, Puerto Rico
Tue Jan 13, 2009 8:29 pm
Nice short story, itt captures perfectly the dark essence of the game Kudos
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Tue Oct 20, 2009 10:05 pm
Do not know much about the game, just from the movie. This is pretty good, but would benefit greatly from a beta. There are some grammar issues.

Overall, not bad.

Thank you for sharing.

rous
 
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