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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004 Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Sun Mar 30, 2008 3:52 pm
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Very intriguing beginning I'm wondering, what is this little girl going to grow up to do? |
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Emira
Joined: 11 Nov 2007 Reviews: 6
Location: Sweden
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Fri Apr 04, 2008 6:51 am
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| I like you story and I'm looking forward to see what happens. |
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JediJenny
Joined: 20 May 2005 Reviews: 7
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Sun Apr 06, 2008 11:30 am
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| I am enjoying this story very much. I look forward to future updates and seeing where this is going. |
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Emira
Joined: 11 Nov 2007 Reviews: 6
Location: Sweden
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Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:33 am
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Hi,
I think you're writing is very good, I like the way you make her a strong woman able to fend for herslef and still I feel as if she is right at home in that time. I thought the scene with her and Theoden was well written.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
//Emira |
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Emira
Joined: 11 Nov 2007 Reviews: 6
Location: Sweden
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Wed Apr 09, 2008 2:21 am
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Now, that's a twist : ) What els do you have in store for me to read? Does Alden come back and what happens with Eomer? I'm looking forward to the rest.
//Emira |
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Emira
Joined: 11 Nov 2007 Reviews: 6
Location: Sweden
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Tue Apr 15, 2008 3:08 pm
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| I like this chapter, it was nice that you brought Merry into you story. I have a feeling Alden is going to die but I suspect you won't tell me until the end. You write very well. I'm looking forward to reading more. |
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Emira
Joined: 11 Nov 2007 Reviews: 6
Location: Sweden
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Tue May 20, 2008 1:24 pm
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Hi,
Just wondering if you are planing on continuing (sorry about the spelling) with the story. I would like to read more.
//Emira |
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005 Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
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Sun May 25, 2008 6:10 pm
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| Ah! did you have to stop it right there? I know cliffhanger, this was a very good chapter will be waiting for more(on the edge of my seat) LOL Deb the Imp |
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JediJenny
Joined: 20 May 2005 Reviews: 7
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Sun May 25, 2008 7:20 pm
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| I had a feeling that she was LothÃriel. Another great chapter can't wait for the next. |
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Emira
Joined: 11 Nov 2007 Reviews: 6
Location: Sweden
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Mon Jun 02, 2008 8:01 am
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I like the part where Eomer holds her while she cries and howshe askes Beda to wait for her.
You are a good writer. |
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