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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Wed Apr 16, 2008 3:10 pm
Congratulations on your first posting! Smile smiley face

This is a very evocative, poetic take on Nerdanel's feelings, and nicely done too. I can almost hear her whisper the words you've given her. And you conveyed her sadness and loss, longing and despair in a limited number of words, which is always quite a task to accomplish. Thank you very much for sharing.
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Wed Apr 16, 2008 7:26 pm
This poem has so much feeling, and I imagine that Nerdanel's thoughts went something like this. Good job. I hope you write more soon!
 
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