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sculder
Joined: 16 Aug 2003
Reviews: 12
Location: Sacramento, CA
Thu Oct 30, 2003 2:13 am
Nice work, good read. But do elves really say "sure as hell"?
 
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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
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Sat Nov 08, 2003 4:44 am
Nice work Smile smiley face Your Legolas was suitably tormented and grief stricken, and the queit acknowledgement of Gimli and their friendship was beautifully incorporated. Your inclusion of the Evenstar was also very well done. I must agreew ith sculder above: "sure as hell" did jar for me as well. Otherwise, a very good piece!
 
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Wed Apr 07, 2004 9:21 am
That's a very interesting take on Legolas' point of view. Thank you for sharing it with us. Smile smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Thu Jul 15, 2004 10:24 am
Very nicely done. It confused me at first, just like the dream would. Then I had to slowly come to the realization that it was not all a dream. I am not sure an Elf would say 'sure as hell', but I am certain that they had phrases that would match some of ours. Since we cannot write a story in its entirety in Elvish, we must rely on modern vernacular, to some extent. I have read the phrases "Valar" "By Elbreath" and "By the Valar". Did they really say those things? Who knows. I really think it is the emotion behind the words that is important. Thank you for a very nice piece.
 
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