Reviews for "Kementari"
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Fri May 16, 2008 2:57 am
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| Were the Ents already in decline back then, before Dwarves even woke? That makes me sad. But then, I thnk this piece was supposed to make me a little gloomy, eh? Good job, then! I think you have captured a Vala's mind here, which is no mean feat. At once she's powerful and aware of her power, and at the same time she wastes time lamenting what was or could have been. Someone of a more hasty race wouldn't spend her time thus, which of course, reminds me again of her link to the Ents. Nice piece of writing here. |
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