This is beautiful and I think shows the wonderful strength in a true 'coming together' over time, how strong those bonds can be in a good relationship.
and I especially love the 'demanding eyes' line! How she sees a reflection of her husband in the man her infant son is going to be.
well done.
Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Tue Jul 01, 2008 10:52 am
Oooh.I love the sea metaphor here! So appropriate for Lothiriel! You've also drawn a relationship here that I think is both strong and romantic -- exactly what I'd always hoped for the horselord. Excellent piece!
mahisslp
Joined: 23 Feb 2006 Reviews: 16
Location: Ohio
Thu Jul 03, 2008 5:38 pm
Just -- Wow! That was so powerful!
elea24
Joined: 20 Aug 2007 Reviews: 12
Location: UK
Fri Jul 04, 2008 7:23 am
That was just achingly beautiful! What a lovely partnership you have crafted for Eomer and Lothiriel. It was a joy to read. Thank you.
RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Mon Jul 07, 2008 4:01 am
Very beautifully written. Thank you a lot for sharing. I enjoyed reading your story very much