Reviews for "Engaged in Sport"

Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:06 pm

OH Dear!! LOL!! This is priceless! I especially love your very first line, and the rest of it followed through in fine order. I absolutely love Orc-fic, and we certainly don't have enough of it around. This is a wonderful addtion to the genre.

Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:36 pm

I enjoy a bit of orc- talk, too. And if Eomer's involved as well ...what can I say! LBJ

Sun Jul 06, 2008 4:14 am

Ha! Very enjoyable and very vivdly written Smile smiley face

The first line is priceless, IMO. A well done response to the challenge. Thank you Very Happy smiley face

Sun Jul 06, 2008 2:12 pm

I liked the fight scene! And that intro part from Ugluk's point of view was tasty! Good work!

Sun Jul 06, 2008 2:21 pm

Great job! I enjoyed his daydreaming. I think you did a great job on the battle scene. It's hard to write something without any planning! This is a great addition to the challenge.

Mon Jul 07, 2008 8:02 am

You're going to become a orc writer yet Pip. Very icky where it needed to be icky and I like the way you had the orcs speaking (improper English). You've done great on this challenge!

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