Reviews for "Taming the Wildflower"

Tue Jul 08, 2008 1:43 pm

Wow! Fans herself quickly!
I really must get into this First-age stuff! LBJ

Tue Jul 08, 2008 2:45 pm

"Never lick the courier" ... Words to live by, indeed! This whole piece was a voluptuous, naughty, breathless read. You use such rich language. I held off reading the earlier version on GoI because I suspected that I'd want to indulge virgin eyes on the final product. I was right. This was delicious. Almost I want it to continue, but then I realize that this is the perfect ending. It doesn't distort canon but lends a subtext to suesequent interactions. I can wholly believe that something like this happened. But I *do* have a niggle of curiosity... whatever happened to Rhavloth?

Tue Jul 08, 2008 3:56 pm

Oh, this is so good! So intense and rich, and flows like a wave, sneaking away and teasing, then crashing back! Color me hooked Very Happy smiley face

Tue Jul 08, 2008 5:29 pm

YAYYYYYYY You posted it!!! Which means you have to FINISH it Very Happy smiley face

And I agree with everything I said before - hot hot hot and great start to this. Keep it up.

Tue Jul 08, 2008 5:30 pm

LadyBluejay said
Wow! Fans herself quickly!
I really must get into this First-age stuff! LBJ

Those elves from the House of Finwe are the hawtest Wink smiley face

Wed Jul 09, 2008 9:18 am

Alassante said
YAYYYYYYY You posted it!!! Which means you have to FINISH it And I agree with everything I said before - hot hot hot and great start to this. Keep it up.

yes, LOL, I'll finish it. The Maedhros-muse is driving me insane though. I'm not getting anything else done.

and Thank you, yes, Elea ... decadent is always good! Wink smiley face

Thu Jul 10, 2008 8:24 pm

I'm so glad you reposted this story because I never read it the first time and I'm totally digging it. I like the changes you made and its so polished now it sparkles. Like a Silmaril lol

Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:02 am

I do marvel at the intensity of this story. It seems vibrating and grips the reader from the very first line. I like how you've portrayed the Feanorians and conveyed the interactions between them. A bit of foreshadowing had me catch my breath. Celegorm + Doriath... oh dear Sad smiley face

Nice idea with the Silmaril as a jewel that should adorn the bride's beauty.

Wondefully done! I'm looking forward to reading more.

Sat Jul 12, 2008 4:17 pm

Oooooh, wow. Wow, I... Wow. *deep breath* Okay, so. I've only gotten into the first chapter so far because a) this is a treat that absolutely MUST be savored, and b) if I get all the way into reading this now, I will completely lose momentum in everything else I'm trying to accomplish right now, up to and including breathing. You've singlehandedly (pun REALLY not intended but I'm leaving it anyway) returned me to my overstimulated hyperfocusing habit of pencil-twirling, which, aside from being an endless source of amusement for my cat, is a sign that I am officially hooked. And I will most certainly be back, because I'm as wrapped up in this one as I could possibly be without actually being the main character(s). Very, very well done.

Sat Jul 19, 2008 11:19 am

Ah, so one of the house of Finwe managed to cross the girdle and made it to the Hidden Kingdom! I'm eagerly looking forward to reading more. Beautiful story-telling, Sulriel. Thank you so much Smile smiley face

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