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Capriole
Joined: 02 Jul 2003
Reviews: 2
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Fri Oct 31, 2003 9:15 pm
Ooh I liked this! You worded it so I can almost see the ghost elves passing through. And the idea of the land remembering is really unique to write this angle for a story. Really well done!
 
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Silreth
Joined: 07 Jun 2003
Reviews: 15
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Sun Nov 02, 2003 8:45 am
Wow! I love this. You're very talented. Beyond great story line. Tolkien, to say the least.
 
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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
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Sat Nov 08, 2003 4:31 am
Wonderful piece of writing! Your language was so evocative and lyric it was a pleasure to read. Well Done!
 
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
Sun Nov 30, 2003 4:15 am
I loved this story at the Other Place. And it is great to see it here. A truly fantastic ghost story. Laughing smiley face
 
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Ingole
Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 36
Location: Washington State, USA
Thu Apr 15, 2004 11:28 pm
Magic. I could hear the narrator speaking aloud and the description gave me head pictures. And it made me want to cry for the loss of the Elves in this time...A gem!
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Wed May 05, 2004 10:01 pm
This is just gorgeous writing. Your point-of-view character has a voice that's so smooth, so evocative, I just fell right into the rhythm. He's a storyteller through and through. And since you created him, I guess that makes you goddess of storytellers.
 
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Greymist
Joined: 24 May 2004
Reviews: 3
Location: Western US
Tue May 25, 2004 2:18 am
Lovely POV piece - absolutely delicate crafting... made me see that field and feel the wind in my face.
Beautiful piece of work.
 
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Yavanie

Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
Sun Jun 20, 2004 8:25 am
Couldn't possible top the praise already given. Hauntingly beautiful, well crafted, I felt like I had strayed into the dream!

Yavanie
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Sat Aug 26, 2006 11:31 pm
Wish I could add something new. This was wonderful. It speaks of the loss of a major part of the land. Just beautiful. Thank you, so much, for sharing. I am truly thankful this was featured today.

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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
Thu Dec 30, 2010 2:46 am
That which is seen and that which is understood are often, even now, very different things. I love the feeling of reality of this story; it is genuine. I could almost see a modern farmer somewhere in rural Europe with his pint and his Wellies at the pub of an evening, or standing leaned on his spade telling us this in the confidence shared between those who know the land and understand that we are not all there is to the world. Just glorious.
 
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