Reviews for "Tel' Lindar (The Bard)"

Fri Oct 31, 2003 8:24 am

Zee, darling, I'm so happy you decided to make a sequel! And what a sequel! Lol.
I'm enjoying this one greatly. Hope to read some more soon.

Sat Nov 01, 2003 5:20 am

You killed Haldir?!? I'm still in shock.... need more!! Sequel=good.... needed more Bronwyn!

Sat Nov 01, 2003 9:51 am

Halmuse & SnapeBaby in one fic? Very Happy smiley face

Yes Please! Im enjoying this, well written as usual, nice and original. Its good to see your obvious love for Bronny coming through in such a carefully crafted way. This is what prevents this fic from being a Sue. More pls!

Sun Nov 02, 2003 9:57 pm

Zee, you killed Haldir. This is huge. I need some time to digest this. You have made an easy and understandable link between these two worlds - I love the interactions between MiddleEarth and Hogwarts folk. After I got thru my initial freakout about Haldir, I can see that Bronwyn and Snape might have some interesting areas to explore. I am looking forward to the next chapters. As always, I am a HUGE fan of your writing - the unexpected humor, the prickly characters, the lyrics always draw me in. Keep up the great work!

Sat Nov 08, 2003 4:13 am

Zee, a wonderful melding of these two different sources! Two of my favourite fandoms, so I am very happy to see that not only are you writing another fic, but that it will feature LOTR and HP! Haldir; words cannot express how I felt. I shall be very interested (albeit traumatised!) to see how your develope this, and how the connection between Snape and the Voyeur grows, assuming it will Laughing smiley face

I am also very caught by the dynamic between Snape and Bronwyn. Both are very true to what we know of them already, and their task will be very interesting to read. I have an inkling of what a future twist may be, but won't say just in case I taint a surprise or amke you go "huh????!!!" great work, as always, and looking forward to the next chapter!

Fri Nov 14, 2003 10:46 am

BellemaineChercoeur said
> I have an inkling of what a future twist may be, but won't say just in case I taint a surprise or amke you go "huh????!!!"

Hmmmm - what IS your inkling??? Email me at ZeDrippyVessel@aol.com and tell me. Even if your wrong, you might set off a bunny.

That's how armor removal with teeth got started....

Thanks everyone for reading this silliness. Don't give up on Haldir yet - - he has plenty to say about all this!!!!

Zee

Sat Nov 22, 2003 11:54 am

I could NEVER give up on Haldir. But I Am adoring the way the two fandons are interacting. 'people will think we are a couple', indeed... lol. goodness, this is priceless. love to find new chapters.
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Mon Nov 24, 2003 5:30 pm

This keeps getting better and better! I dont know if you realise, your style of writing is changing ever so slightly. Chapters 3 onwards are so fluid and rich, i feel like im reading a professional novel.

Im intrigued with Rumil and who he will end up with! I love that Severus is staying a resolute character and is not gushy and out of canon (from what i understand of his persona).

My only niggle is the HP stuff. Please keep it in the back of your mind that some of your readers are following this fic because we loved Empty Vessel and have never read the HP books so may not understand certain references you make. Also - the music quotes... They are obviously very personal and meaningful to you. Is it possible for you to include the full song name and artist all of the time? Im having to do a lot of legwork on yahoo to trace some of them since i want to hear what you hear!

I can't wait for chapter 6! You never update fast enough for my greedy eyes! Very Happy smiley face

Tue Nov 25, 2003 12:27 pm

LuckyObsidian said
> This keeps getting better and better! I dont know if you realise, your style of writing is changing ever so slightly. Chapters 3 onwards are so fluid and rich, i feel like im reading a professional novel.

Wow. Thank you.

>I love that Severus is staying a resolute character and is not gushy and out of canon (from what i understand of his persona).

Nothing I hate more than to see a canon toughie turned into a wuss. It won't happen to Snape. My HP beta is BRUTAL on him staying in character and if she ain't happy, neither am I! Snape will remain snarky!

>My only niggle is the HP stuff. Please keep it in the back of your mind that some of your readers are following this fic because we loved Empty Vessel and have never read the HP books so may not understand certain references you make.

Hmmmm - okay, the only clarifiers I saw would be a: Remus Lupin is a werewolf. A relunctant one, but one regardless. Snape brews a potion for him that lessens the affect of his changing. He still locks himself up on the nights of the full moon.

and

b: Fluffy. Fluffy is a giant, drooling, 3 headed dog that is quite mean. The only way to soothe the beastie is to play music.

Any other questions? Please ask.

>Also - the music quotes... They are obviously very personal and meaningful to you. Is it possible for you to include the full song name and artist all of the time? Im having to do a lot of legwork on yahoo to trace some of them since i want to hear what you hear!

I usually post everything I have on them. If I use a GREAT deal of one song throughout - I will post the legalities once. If it's a song fic - I will post all of the info at the end. (I have to post them somewhere... legalities and such...)

>I can'twait for chapter 6! You never update fast enough for my greedy eyes!

Thursdays. Normally Thursdays. Have had RL issues - I moved home 2 weeks ago and between no phone and when I got phone, modem croaked and new one won't load, it's been difficult. I posted early this week because of the holiday.

Thank all of you so much for reading.

Zee

Fri Dec 05, 2003 11:59 pm

Oh Zee!

That was wonderful!

Your chapters are so fluid and rich! I loved EV but this is so much darker and IMO real! Her emotions and reactions are highly believable and Snape is intense and yummy!

Im so grateful Hal makes his lil appearances!

Cant wait till next Thursday!

BTW - i prefer to review you here rather than on our yahoo groups. Hope you dont mind!

Mora xxx

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