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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Mon Jul 28, 2008 12:15 pm
Your story breathes and trembles with anticipation. Very touching and enjoyable read Smile smiley face Thank you for sharing.
 
Author's replied on Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:29 am
Hiya Robinka, Thank you for your review of my story "First Sight". "Trembles with anticipation" is a good description for it - I'm glad you liked it! Marta
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Tue Jul 29, 2008 4:18 pm
I like this version of Arwen, as the ingenue, all blushes and wishes. It's very early 19th-century. (As is the language, a little bit.) I also like Aragorn as the striptease. Rowr.
 
Author's replied on Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:54 am
Thank you, Viv! I'll be honest, I wasn't trying consciously to evoke the nineteenth-century, but it's a lovely period in literature so I will gladly take that mental image. Thanks for reading this.
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Nov 30, 2009 6:56 am
So nicely done. I love the language and the images. Very in tone with the setting of the original stories.

Thank you for sharing.

roue
 
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