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inglor

Joined: 26 Apr 2004
Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
Sat Aug 23, 2008 10:54 pm
That'll show her....
Nice build up. Both his and hers. I like your take on his Affect. Poor girl...
You never cease to entertain and make me glad I stopped to read
 
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
Mon Aug 25, 2008 8:44 pm
Still love it, especially that last line: "What have you done lately."

HA! Great job, Viv.
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Tue Aug 26, 2008 2:08 pm
Heh, indeed, there's no reply to a question such as this one at the end. Very skilfully drawn Smile smiley face Thanks for sharing.
 
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