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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004 Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 8:46 pm
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| You already know how much I love this story. I'm excited to see you posting it here and am looking forward to reading the final version chapter by chapter. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Sep 15, 2008 11:07 pm |
| Thanks! I have you and everyone at GoI to thank for all the wonderful help, advice, discussion and information that came my way in the process of writing this. I owe you all so very much, and am deely appreciative. |
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lissaselves

Joined: 28 Dec 2007 Reviews: 42
Location: Right here!
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Wed Sep 17, 2008 2:46 pm
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Yay - you've started posting it!!! I look forward to reading the complete story.
This first chapter is delightful; I love your rather cynical look at the great city of Minas Tirith. Just because there's now a king doesn't mean that all its inhabitants have suddenly turned into saints. Ivoreth is certainly lucky this day!
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Thu Sep 18, 2008 9:18 pm
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| this is absolutely rrefreshing! do update more! ^_^ |
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Melangil
Joined: 11 Mar 2008 Reviews: 2
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Tue Sep 30, 2008 11:39 am
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so far a good story... looking forward to reading more. Good Luck
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Dulcinea

Joined: 25 Nov 2006 Reviews: 64
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Thu Oct 09, 2008 12:06 pm
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| Great story. I am looking forward to more. |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat Oct 18, 2008 4:27 pm
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| Just a little note to say how much I am enjoying this story. Poor child, so worried, and doubtless it is going to take a while to earn her trust and do something about her brother, and all the others. |
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Dulcinea

Joined: 25 Nov 2006 Reviews: 64
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Tue Oct 28, 2008 11:10 pm
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| I am enjoying this story. I amm glad she went back to the houses of healing and opened up to Elladan. I hope she tells him more about her brother so that they can be reunited. |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat Nov 01, 2008 1:55 pm
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| I am so glad that it has occured to Elladan that she thinks he's sending them to the orphanage. I am very curious as to exactly what he has got in store... |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat Nov 15, 2008 1:40 pm
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I think the King may be learning things about his kingdom that he had never thought to ask about...
Again a beuatifully written chapter. |
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Dulcinea

Joined: 25 Nov 2006 Reviews: 64
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Sat Nov 15, 2008 2:20 pm
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| I'm glad things are cleared up about Darren. Now that the King is on the case, everything will be sorted out. |
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