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Dulcinea

Joined: 25 Nov 2006 Reviews: 64
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Sat Nov 29, 2008 2:06 pm
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| Another great chapter. Poor Daren! I hope the King can help him. |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat Nov 29, 2008 5:43 pm
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Oh dear - what have they done to the poor child?
I await the next chapter with great interest. |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat Dec 06, 2008 3:17 pm
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| How sad. I admire you, as the writer, taking this step rather than the easier alternative. I find myself feeling sorry for poor King Ellessar having the minutae of ruling brought home to him so clearly - you have to get the people to do the right things, and have the right attitude, all the way down to the very bottom of the system... |
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sammas
Joined: 17 May 2008 Reviews: 3
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Tue Dec 16, 2008 11:37 am
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| light fingers is a great story.thank you |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat Dec 20, 2008 6:17 pm
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| Ah - shades of Heidi - and I am not really surprised, poor child. I wonder what she will make of Elladan's grandmother who looks about 5 years older than he does himself, at most! Have a nice Christmas. |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Sun Dec 21, 2008 12:14 am
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| The more I read, the more I want to weep for the poor children... Love this story, luv. |
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Annye
Joined: 07 Feb 2008 Reviews: 8
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Sun Dec 21, 2008 4:10 am
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Another great chapter, I love it! Thank you,
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Dulcinea

Joined: 25 Nov 2006 Reviews: 64
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Sat Dec 27, 2008 2:24 pm
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| Wonderful! I look forward to the sequel! I want to know how Rani and Ivoreth grow up. Thanks for this story! |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat Dec 27, 2008 2:36 pm
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| That was lovely - I look forward to a sequel very much. I do hope Elrohir will feel that Ivoreth has earned his friendship again by then... |
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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008 Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Sun Dec 28, 2008 2:59 pm
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| Thank you for this wonderful story. Your talent is amazing! Can't wait for the sequel. |
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