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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Tue Sep 23, 2008 10:04 pm
Awww thank you!!! Very vivid imagery - I never really thought too much about the lure of the Palantir other than a way to be all control freaky. But it is probably like the Silmarils and having that seductive/magnetic pull. I love this! *hugs*
 
Author's replied on Wed Sep 24, 2008 7:14 pm
You're welcome! And thanks for the review. Smile smiley face Oddly enough, this one came to me while watching an episode of "Fringe"...
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Wed Sep 24, 2008 12:01 am
Ohhh, excellent! A great portrayal of an addict that cannot see, or doesn't want to see, the danger until it's too late. And a fine gift for a friend Smile smiley face Bravo!
 
Author's replied on Wed Sep 24, 2008 7:17 pm
Thank you! I don't know how I keep ending up inside addicts' heads, but whatever works, huh? Wink smiley face
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Senta
Joined: 10 Mar 2004
Reviews: 57
Location: UK
Wed Sep 24, 2008 1:41 am
I loved this.You capture Denethor perfectly and his ill fated obsession.
 
Author's replied on Wed Sep 24, 2008 7:18 pm
Thanks! I've discovered that Denethor can be a lot of fun in the right mood...
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Sun Sep 28, 2008 1:58 pm
Very nicely done, Vlad. Of course, the addiction always seems extremely sensible, at first, and makes the user feel powerful - until they become powerless, of course. You caught that perfectly here.
 
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MedeaSmyke

Joined: 15 Sep 2008
Reviews: 18
Location: Great Lakes, US
Sun Sep 28, 2008 7:32 pm
The Gondorians seemed to have inherited the Numenorean desire to know more than they should and I like how you captured that with Denethor and the palantir.
 
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