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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Thu Oct 02, 2008 3:25 pm
LMFAO! You're so not right Viv. But I loves you for it. That was hysterical and wonderful as always. How do you blend canon and humor with a poetic flare?
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:52 pm
Fablious! Fablious! You are just amazing, Viv. I can see how a verse or two might have popped into one's head almost without effort, but to keep it going and keep it going well is a true feat - or feet, I suppose. The rhyme and metre had one or two missteps - but considering what you had to work with that's totally understandable. I really admire your ability to take your writing seriously, and your subject matter not at all!
 
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
Thu Oct 02, 2008 6:09 pm
Every time I read a story of yours, I think, "it just can't get any funnier than this," but you continue to prove me wrong!

I love the limericks. This is fantastically funny. Great contribution to the challenge.
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Thu Oct 02, 2008 7:46 pm
Excessive funny fine!! Smile smiley face
Always a joy to read - nevermind it was the easiest, most pleasant beta evah! Smile smiley face
*bows to the mistress of raunchy rhyme*
 
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Senta
Joined: 10 Mar 2004
Reviews: 57
Location: UK
Thu Oct 02, 2008 8:54 pm
Just hilarious!
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Fri Oct 03, 2008 1:13 am
ROTFL! Very Happy smiley face Viv, this is hysterical! Brilliant challenge entry!
 
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PippinIonad

Joined: 21 May 2008
Reviews: 1
Location: *cough*Middle Earth *cough*
Fri Oct 03, 2008 4:42 pm
Ahhh! a great feat of writing!

Loved it Viv! - certainly gave me something to giggle about!

Pi[
 
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vladazhael

Joined: 16 Dec 2005
Reviews: 147
Location: Gone mad, back later
Sat Oct 04, 2008 3:26 pm
I laughed so hard that I snorted a little. Seriously, I would memorize and recite this at parties if I thought the ten people who might show up at my parties were informed enough to appreciate it. You just burned right through that challenge; I love it!
 
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Haleth

Joined: 27 Sep 2003
Reviews: 96
Location: The ruins of Tharbad.
Sun Oct 05, 2008 6:50 am
Brava! This is hilarious and canon accurate.

I think you should be poet-laureate of OSA, Viv.
 
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lissaselves

Joined: 28 Dec 2007
Reviews: 42
Location: Right here!
Mon Oct 06, 2008 1:22 pm
*g* hehe - clever! !

I particularly loved these lines:

'I spent time in wonder
What else he had under
His maille faulds to stave off the cold.'

And she turns out to be quite a resourceful lass, too. Smile smiley face)
 
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