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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Thu Oct 02, 2008 7:59 pm

What a lovely, thoughtful pieceSmile smiley face Just as today the news rarely report anything but disaster and disarray, so do the history books count the years by wars and dark deeds.
I really enjoyed reading this; thanks for sharing it!
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Thu Oct 02, 2008 8:30 pm

I really love that you found the irony in this character's undocumented life: that that which we value most (peace) is not as noteworthy as that which we fear (death), and that good deeds often go unrewarded. I thought the fic lost focus a bit though at the end, with his meditations on Elvenkind. It was charming, but less compelling.
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Fri Oct 03, 2008 2:18 am

Yes, he is right when he thinks that one's peaceful existence seems less worthy a mention in the chronicles. Isn't it ironic?

Insightful, thought-provoking, well done. Smile smiley face
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:18 am

I love this line: "I live a dull existence perhaps, but it gives me time to dream about the stars." Sometimes it's easier to bemoan what we lack than to be appreciative of what we have. And his notion that being a peaceful king might make him more likely to see elves in the future seems to be very well-founded. Good job writing a difficult character!
 
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vladazhael

Joined: 16 Dec 2005
Reviews: 147
Location: Gone mad, back later
Sat Oct 04, 2008 3:19 pm

Not only did you shed some light on the life of a largely ignored character; you actually made me want to find out more about him. You also did a very nice job of addressing some large themes in a short work. Well done!
 
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
Sun Oct 05, 2008 7:22 pm

War is definitely more newsworthy. Great glimpse of a time-frame largely ignored.
 
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