Reviews for "You Can't Take the Sky From Me"

Sat Oct 04, 2008 10:20 pm

I dig dig dig this arrogance! The voice is excellent. "For it was the stars that should comment first"< -- squee! Really nice work, Vlad, and it's not even smutty! Wink smiley face

Sun Oct 05, 2008 4:04 am

I agree with Viv. You've done an excellent job with conveying the arrogant tone of his voice. A great response to the challenge, Vlad. Bravo!

Sun Oct 05, 2008 7:22 am

I like so many things about this fic, but most often the little touches: the narrator's petulance, how the stars go 'out of reach' during the day, his view of himself at the center of the universe. Meets the challenge well and brings to light an interesting character at an interesting time.

Sun Oct 05, 2008 7:21 pm

Wonderful piece! It shows his arrogance and also his insecurities. I love the way you use small details to show his inner turmoil. Great job.

Sun Oct 05, 2008 10:20 pm

Very nicely written; I like the way you paint so much into so small a narrative space -- all the little details that say so much about his personality, his attitude, and the time and place around him. Very cool! Smile smiley face

Login

Navigation

RSS Feeds

Reviews for "You Can't Take the Sky From Me"