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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
Mon Oct 06, 2008 11:14 am
What an amazing story! I love your imagery. You had me on the edge of my seat. The little details, such as running her hands through the rosemary, gave the story so much depth.

This is a wonderful addition to the challenge.
 
Author's replied on Mon Oct 06, 2008 9:38 pm
Thank you, I try my bestSmile smiley face
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Tue Oct 07, 2008 1:55 am
Very nice Smile smiley face The imagery is rich and the atmosphere breathes with tension. A well done challenge entry. Thank you Very Happy smiley face and brava!
 
Author's replied on Tue Oct 07, 2008 8:38 pm
Thank *you*! It was fun, and I'm glad it is being enjoyedSmile smiley face
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Mon Oct 13, 2008 5:05 pm
Good heavens, you actually did it. You wrote a mystery! You had ambiance and tension and creaking floorboards and everything! You definitely need to do more of these, because you have a knack for creating just the right atmosphere..I don't know the characters all that well, but now you've got me itchin to read more about them, and their quiet, secret heroics. Thank you so much for writing this; I very much enjoyed reading it.
 
Author's replied on Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:43 pm
Thanks! *blush* It was a very fun experiment Smile smiley face
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