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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Wed Oct 22, 2008 2:55 am
A wonderful way to describe a spirit. I like the way in which you conveyed his emotions, insecurity and his strong bond with his family. Also, a nice portrayal of Namo, he seems a father comforting a sad and disoriented child. Well done! Smile smiley face Thank you for sharing.
 
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lissaselves

Joined: 28 Dec 2007
Reviews: 42
Location: Right here!
Wed Oct 22, 2008 12:48 pm
I read this already on your LJ, but just had to tell you again how much I like it.

Your description of how the Elf's projected body displays his moods is brilliant. And the matter-of-fact, yet compassionate Namo comes across very well.

A lovely read!
 
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:35 pm
Beautiful and terrible and evocative.

The thing he wants most of all he must let go of... heartbreaking.
 
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vladazhael

Joined: 16 Dec 2005
Reviews: 147
Location: Gone mad, back later
Sun Dec 07, 2008 5:05 pm
You don't sugarcoat it, and neither does Namo - there's an odd sort of comfort to that. I like it.
 
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