Reviews for "Harry Potter and the Heir of Gondor"

Sat Nov 15, 2003 9:35 am

Several things.

This is a very interesting premise. Some wonderful ideas and some seriously bouncing bunnies. Neat concept for Harry to really be the son of Arwen and Aragorn.

Now for the "stuff" - -

1. Grey Company. Don't use them. Their "elvish" is really Grelvish - made up and not Tolkein. There a several more reliable ones - Encyclopeida of Arda, several others...

2. You need a beta. There are times when grammatical and other things glare out.

3. You need to smooth your transitions from object to object, conversation to conversation, create the flow.

4. In all honesty - I don't know if you will be able to make the "Harry isn't really Harry" angle fly. Perhaps a shared body experience or this other person in his head, creating havoc...

This is a wonderful rough draft and I honestly think that with some tweaking and working, this has the makings of a wonderful fic. Keep plugging.

Zee

Wed Nov 19, 2003 6:11 am

keep it up dieing 2 find out wat happenz

Mon Jan 19, 2004 1:40 am

Great story! I can't wait for you to update. How will Hermione take the news? WHen will Aragorn and Arwen see Harry again? I can't wait to find out.

Tiffany Smile smiley face

Wed Oct 13, 2004 12:50 pm

Bravo!Bravo! I love it so far. please update soon.

egastin

Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:36 pm

I really hope you haven't abandoned this great story! I hope you will be or are updating it soon Smile smiley face

Wed Oct 24, 2007 12:42 am

BRAVO! Please, do continue!

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