Reviews for "A Clumsy Serenade"
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MedeaSmyke

Joined: 15 Sep 2008 Reviews: 18
Location: Great Lakes, US
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Tue Dec 09, 2008 12:05 am
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| Sulfur powder? LOL! |
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| Author's replied on Mon Dec 15, 2008 2:29 am |
I'm glad you liked that part. It stuck in my head when the bunny for this first bit me, so I had to add it. Thanks for reviewing. |
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Tue Dec 09, 2008 12:28 am
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| I like the notion that Eldarion and Legolas became friends, or rather that Legolas became kind of a mentor to Eldarion. The thought of Legolas, the most famous bachelor of his day (probably), giving dating advice strikes me as very funny, too. There's a sweetness to this piece that I really enjoyed, and the ending made me smile. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Dec 15, 2008 2:29 am |
| Thank you Viv for taking the time to leave a review and give your opinion. It's certainly helpful to me as an author to know what my readers like, and how they viewed my story. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Sat Dec 13, 2008 1:23 pm
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Very amusing and touching at the same time What a cute tale! Thanks a lot for sharing. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Dec 15, 2008 2:30 am |
Thank you so much for taking the time to review my story! I really appreciate it and I'm glad you liked it.  |
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