Reviews for "Peace At Last"

Fri Jan 02, 2009 3:17 am

This is such a beautiful and emotional scene! It reminds me of the FotR movie and the scene when Aragorn bade farewell to his mother. But here, many years after, he says good-bye to his daughter, and you have portrayed him, and conveyed his thoughts, very well. I can "see" him stand there and trail his fingers along the letters carved in the stone. And I love the birds -- the symbol of peace Aragorn finally found.

Very beautiful. Very well done. Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face

Fri Jan 02, 2009 5:05 pm

Is there more to this? This chapter raises so many backstory questions: what was Legolas to Aragorn's daughter? How did she save all those lives? Why was he more attached to this daughter than to all of his other unnamed (in canon) daughters? Argh! I need to know the answers! lol. Hope you will write more of this. The prose is nice, almost lyrical, and I don't see any major grammar problems. The pacing is kind of slow, but that's because nothing really happens in this scene. It'll pick up when you get into a nice action or dialogue stretch. Smile smiley face

Fri Jan 02, 2009 5:44 pm

A very touching story

Login

Navigation

RSS Feeds

Reviews for "Peace At Last"