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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Sat Jan 03, 2009 2:43 pm
What I find really horryfying, in a good sense, about this ficlet wasn't even the gory images of Finwe's death at the hands of Melkor. It was, I think, his hope that Feanor would avenge that, but Finwe had no idea what the revenge might bring -- the terrible oath, the rebellion and the kinslaying.

Perfectly done. It sent chills down my spine.
 
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Sun Jan 04, 2009 1:49 pm
Alassante. You know I 'liked' the first version of this, but I'm so glad you were challenged to rework it because I find this version absolutely amazing. You have really outdone yourself with this one, it's the best portrayal of this scene that I've read.
 
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Sun Jan 11, 2009 9:02 pm
Powerful! I especially like Finwe's last words and the reference to the fact he would soon be joined by the Teleri. What his reaction must have been to that!
 
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peredhillover
Joined: 26 Sep 2006
Reviews: 2
Location: Canada
Mon May 25, 2009 3:06 pm
Wow. I’m just now getting around to reading some of these, and I’ve got to say this was really powerful. Excellent writing.
 
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