Reviews for "Starlight Bathing, or The First Time..."

Tue Jan 06, 2009 5:29 am

*weeeeeeeeeeeeeee*

It was me, uttering a girly squeeeeeeeeeeee when I saw another story in your "The Key" series, hehe. Of course, I read this chapter immediately, and I can say: LOVE it! I had a good laugh at the bath scene -- especially when Dawn was informed she was observed by the elves. She at least did her... let's say: cross-cultural research Wink smiley face

less openly. Gods! I would probably stare at them with my jaw dropped; she was very subtle.

It's good to see her adapt as well as could be, though I'm sure she would feel homesick from time to time. And what Legolas said: that he knew what it was like to be the only elf among the humans -- I nodded thoughtfully and said, "yeah, Dawn's still a stranger, and in some ways she'll always be."

Oh, and Rumil was hot! Very Happy smiley face

Thanks a lot for posting! I'll be watching this story.

All the best,
Binka

Wed Jan 07, 2009 4:37 am

I really like the concept of "starlight bathing"....I will try it, as soon as I find a suitable hot spring and a willing elf (well...one can always hope!).
I'm waiting to read more about: bathing, elves, naked elves bathing etc.
Bye
annie

Wed Jan 07, 2009 5:00 am

I apologize if my review doesn't seem overly coherent, but as soon as I finished reading I was in dire need of cold shower (or at least of a bucket of icy-cold water all over my head) and I'm still rather dazed from the reading experience. I had all sorts of 'dayum, hotttttt' expressions cross my mind, but well, hardly my fault Wink smiley face

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This was very sensual, classy and erotic to bits (I'm inclined toward the opinion that a bathing and wet elf is better than just an elf, LOL). A romantic in me sighed happily when Rumil apologized for his behavior back in Minas Tirith. All in all, a most enjoyable read, and I'll be here to review when the third chapter is posted.

Thank you!

Wed Jan 07, 2009 9:28 am

You may need another cold shower after chapter 3, which I will post this evening, my time.

And I'm very much looking forward to reading it, and to the subsequent cold shower Very Happy smiley face

Your writing is truly awesome!

Wed Jan 07, 2009 4:54 pm

Ha! You were so right about the chapter! Very Happy smiley face

And now I wish you could see my grin, LOL.

This was a most entertaining story. I'm very glad to have read it and I'm quite sure I will return to it from time to time. Off now, time for the aforementioned shower Wink smiley face

Thanks a lot!

Thu Jan 08, 2009 10:57 am

I have another story in this series in bits, waiting to be pulled together and written properly - it might take a little while, but will be posted here when it is finished.

Oh! That's wonderful to hear Very Happy smiley face

I look forward to reading it, and I'll be here to review. I'm glad that your muse is co-operative. Great news!

Mon Jan 12, 2009 5:26 pm

Wow! Awesome story. Funny and hot and ... kind of cute. Liked it a lot. Loved all Dawn's quirky little thoughts along the way; one would wonder about all these things. lol

I very seldom read 'girl falls into M-E' stories, but I am so glad I did this time. Smile smiley face

Tue Jan 27, 2009 1:25 am

Very enjoyable! I normally don't go for Buffy/LotR crossovers, but I really have liked yours.

Thu Apr 09, 2009 5:18 am

oh this is fabulous! Starlight bathing- a lovely romantic distinction. I loved the bit where Rumil is totally vulnerable and aplogises - how romantic and right! And whe he says- this is not hte first time Ihave taken you out of your dress(probably not exact quote) - ooh, very sensuous and with that titilating edgeI realise I am reading this all in the wrong order but who cares- so enjoyable!

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