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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:40 am
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"when she performed furnunculus on three guys from Slytherin house' ... Hmm. I didn't think she was that kind of girl. 
Thank you so much. I love it! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Feb 03, 2009 9:51 am |
Thanks  I'm glad you like it! |
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eiranae
Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
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Sat Jan 24, 2009 12:21 am
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| Al, you know I love it. Sorry I took so long to get over here and review. I'm looking forward to seeing what Sirius does next! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Feb 03, 2009 9:51 am |
| Thanks for all your help and support on this. I couldn't have done it without you. *hugs* |
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ellisk
Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Mon Jan 26, 2009 9:39 pm
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| The opening line in this is hilarious! A great tone setter for the whole chapter. The language really captures these characters well. I love Sirius in it and Alexia looks like she is going to be a very interesting OC. Great start! I'm looking forward to more! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Feb 03, 2009 9:52 am |
| Thanks El. I have a huge crush on Sirius. And not just Gary Oldman's portrayal. Of course that didn't hurt! |
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vladazhael
Joined: 16 Dec 2005
Reviews: 147
Location: Gone mad, back later
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Wed Jan 28, 2009 10:10 pm
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| Myself, I like the closing line. But then I'm just that type of girl. I see great potential for both characters in this - and I say both because Alexia is yours, and because you've made Sirius yours as well. His personality is one that could definitely grow up to be the person we see in the books, but he's also not there quite yet, and I think that's even more interesting than just taking what we know already and grafting it to a seventeen-year-old frame. I'd like to see how this develops. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Feb 03, 2009 9:53 am |
| Its been hard to think like a teenager at times LOL Its scary to get in their heads! |
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vladazhael
Joined: 16 Dec 2005
Reviews: 147
Location: Gone mad, back later
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Fri Feb 06, 2009 12:03 am
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| My, Alexia gets a lot done in one day! On one hand, she seems to stumble a lot and be rather uncertain - but on the other hand, why wouldn't she be? She's a teenager who appears to be falling in love with Sirius Black - that can't be an incredibly stable experience. Well done. |
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ellisk
Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Sat Feb 07, 2009 9:05 pm
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The thought of being in school with Bellatrix is giving me flashbacks! Yuck!
Great job showing how she might warm up to him and great ending. I can hardly wait to see Sirius's reaction. I hope he manages not to spoil it by being a normal teenage boy. |
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