Reviews for "The Scout and the Rider"
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LadyBluejay

Joined: 03 Feb 2005 Reviews: 126
Location: UK
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Thu Feb 05, 2009 4:30 am
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| Medea, this is excellent. I love your use of language in this - so authentic. Great to see the young Eomund - and I am falling for your Thengel King. |
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| Author's replied on Fri Feb 06, 2009 2:39 pm |
| Working with Eomund was quite fun, and I learned some things that I didn't know before! And I'm glad you like Thengel. Now I need to get my butt in gear and work on that story. Thank you! |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Thu Feb 05, 2009 8:34 am
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| Just a line to say how much I enjoyed this - and good to see a Shieldmaiden being allowed to fight! |
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| Author's replied on Fri Feb 06, 2009 2:34 pm |
| Yes, things would have gone very badly if Saexburga hadn't been there. Thanks very much! |
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Fri Feb 06, 2009 2:15 pm
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Wow, those verbs are excellent. They really move the action scenes and set the stage at the beginning. I swear it felt muddy and icky here in my kitchen when I was reading. Also, Saexbruga! Is she canon or an original? She's mighty! Finally:
"He didn’t need more broken blades! Just one good sword, for the love of Eru, just one!"
bwahahas! Great slinky in-joke there. |
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| Author's replied on Fri Feb 06, 2009 2:33 pm |
I'm glad you liked my verbs. LOL! Saexburga is an original character, but the name belongs to Gwynnyd. She once mentioned that I didn't use any blood-thirsty names. Thanks for reviewing, Viv! |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 1:40 pm
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This was excellent! Action-packed and vivid. I enjoyed the read very much. Thank you for sharing  |
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| Author's replied on Sat Feb 14, 2009 10:15 pm |
| I was very nervous about this piece, so I'm quite glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing! |
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