Reviews for "Among the Lost"

Sun Mar 08, 2009 12:21 pm

Very nice. I loved her hope, and her need to find him, in spite of the fact that it was near to impossible. She seemed a tough woman, and I loved how you expressed that she loved him without actually saying it. Great job!

Mon Mar 09, 2009 6:41 am

You know, I think that you are right, and more than just Éowyn would have sneaked into the ranks. And how well you expressed the strength of their relationship - thank you.

Sat Mar 14, 2009 10:35 am

I really enjoyed this, Neume, not only for the writing but also the concept. Eowyn is referred to as a "Shield-maiden" as if that were an established thing, implying there must be others and I like how you picked up that idea and made a full flesh and blood character out of it. But the heart of the story is in the end; the lovers' conversation works so well you might consider turning it into a double or triple drabble, but then you'd have to change something and that I could not condone.

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