Reviews for "Reunion"
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Mon Mar 09, 2009 6:44 am
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| I think you have captured it perfectly - the Noldor always give me the impression that they saw themselves as superior, and yet they were the ones who corrupted and brought death... |
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| Author's replied on Mon Mar 09, 2009 11:20 am |
Yes, my thoughts exactly 
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and for leaving a review. |
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lissaselves
Joined: 28 Dec 2007
Reviews: 42
Location: Right here!
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Mon Mar 09, 2009 5:13 pm
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>>We gave and took evenly in measure, minding the delicate harmony: no masters, but never truly mastered.
They came with fire and their burning needs to conquer, rule, and possess<<
Yes! Excellently put - so much potential conflict implied in these few words.
This is exactly how I imagine they might have felt, too.
(It's for the SWG prompt, I take it?) |
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| Author's replied on Tue Mar 10, 2009 3:21 am |
Yes, it was written for B2MeM Day First
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! |
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MedeaSmyke
Joined: 15 Sep 2008
Reviews: 18
Location: Great Lakes, US
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Fri Mar 20, 2009 4:51 pm
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| The language is absolutely beautiful in this piece! Well done, indeed! |
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| Author's replied on Mon Mar 23, 2009 2:57 am |
| Thank you tons for stopping by to leave a review I'm glad you liked the drabble. |
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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:13 am
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| This is a point of view you don't see often in fic, but it's totally believable, very much how the Sindar might have reacted to the invaders/brothers. Excellent! |
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| Author's replied on Thu Apr 09, 2009 5:07 am |
| Thank you very much, Viv, for taking the time to read and comment |
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