Wonderful that you have posted this!! It's a perfect addition to your Light Fingers story.
RobinKa
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Thu Apr 09, 2009 11:28 am
This was a really fantastic read. What a brave little girl you created. She was forced to face utter horror and still she managed to take care of her younger siblings, being a 10-year-old herself! You described the horrific events very well, to the point I could nearly hear the noise and smell the smoke -- a very vivid picture you painted with words here. The conclusion of the story gives hope and shows how strong this girl is despite her young age. Very, very well done! I'm now looking forward to having enough time to read the sequel.