Reviews for "Brotherhood."

Thu Sep 17, 2009 4:10 pm

Ch. 21-22. Bah! Of course, everyone (almost everyone) would smell! And have some weird habits as far as hygiene goes.

As for perceiving elves, I think you have described a few very interesting observations, beliefs that come from ignorance and fear. Just like in any other society, the people of Gondor (and Rohan as we could see) might base their opinions on their limited knowledge and some folk tales, which, let us say, can be very far from truth. Poor Legolas... No wonder he felt bad being consider a royal weirdo, lol.

Lomion... Indeed, a meaningful name.

Looking forward to the next part. Thanks!

Thu Sep 24, 2009 3:26 pm

Now this is what I call *Really Good!* I really don't and very rarely do read crossovers. But I have to say you have my attention completely. I love how you incorporated Buffy's sister into this, being involved with the lorien brothers. And the sensitiveness of the *Healing Touch* the tree gave each other. That was beautiful! I did not even stop to review until now! Started a few days ago and have just finished chp 22. Can't wait for the next update

Sat Sep 26, 2009 1:06 pm

I feel sorry for Arwen, I really do. The poor gal is closed behind the solid walls and doors, and behind the strange habits that try to keep her tied to the "throne", whatever that implies, while at the same time someone is plotting against the new king. This must be a very unsettling thought to ponder. But what friends are for? (Actually, I had a very unexpected idea of a the Scooby gang joining in the fun!).

Most intriguing!

(And since this is my 900th review here at OSA, let me cheer for that too!)

Wed Oct 07, 2009 3:29 pm

o_O!

The plot thickens! The so-called lord, errrmm Lomion, put his machinations into practice, hmmmm?

But he kind of proved he wasn't overly clever -- he thought no one was watching him, okay, but did he really think that Eowyn, who had once loved Aragorn, would bring the king of Gondor any harm? (I can sort of understand why he thought so, but still... Going to bet he was sure he was so bloody clever Wink smiley face

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Great job! I'm looking forward to reading the next part Very Happy smiley face

Thanks for the update.

Fri Oct 16, 2009 3:14 pm

M'kay, you've got me recover from a heart attack here Wink smiley face

Jokes aside, this is an action-packed chapter. (But I so didn't see that -- ebol -- cliff hanger comin'! LOL!). I guess it was you aim, wasn't it. You lulled the readers into a slumber, a fairly calm one. The investigation was undergoing; the nurse had her say, and so on, and then BANG!!!

Loved the beginning of the chapter in particular -- being fond of drawing too, I immediately thought that you were doing an awesome job with picking up an artist's PoV, like you did with Rumil's. Yes, he might have had such reflections, I mused, before you stated that. Splendidly done!

Now, where's the next part...?

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Sat Oct 17, 2009 8:18 pm

Wow! What a cliffie... please don't keep us in suspense for long! This is one of the best fics I've ever read.

Thu Oct 29, 2009 7:36 am

You're really fond of cliff hangers, aren't you? Wink smiley face

Now, the rescue squad's undertaking a mission. And what a squad it is! I'm sure Tindome can do much -- as she said, she was trained by the elves and so on, but I'm going to cheer for the Els and Co. Very Happy smiley face

They can so kick a**** too Wink smiley face

I really wish I could've seen it with my own eyes.

Excellent stuff, as always!

Fri Nov 06, 2009 7:38 am

So, now we find out the reason behind the abduction of Tindome. Good that she's a smart lass and can learn as many things as possible from the talk with the ... erm, Lomion that is, to his future disadvantage, I guess. He doesn't really have a clue whom he kidnapped Wink smiley face

Loved Eowyn's musings about the elves and their bearing in a tough time. I'm sure they could look pretty intimidating, scary and fierce when needed, but she doesn't have to be afraid. I think it's that kind of perception: uh, how come they could be warriors since they're just pretty boys, and vice versa. She may not look like a slayer of the Witch King all day long. Anyway, I'm kind of rambling Wink smiley face

I'll shut up now.

Looking forward to seeing what exactly Rumil is planning to do with the man... Ok, did I really say that? Wink smiley face

Waiting for more. Great stuff!

Mon Nov 16, 2009 2:30 pm

Thank Eru for the gift of mind-speech! Easier and cheaper than cell phones, and not to mention that a whole lot safer Wink smiley face

I can understand why Rumil argued with Legolas, but hey he wouldn't have let Lomion live much longer than a mere blink of an eye. The trial would've been unnecessary, no? Now, that Tindome knows they're close and Eowyn had her chance to admire nekkid elves Wink smiley face

(I would love to be in her place for this one moment Very Happy smiley face

), what kind of surprise you hide in your sleeve? Very Happy smiley face

Good stuff! Thanks for updating.

Tue Nov 24, 2009 3:51 pm

*nasty grin* The so-called lord Lomion should have seen that coming.

Though, well, the plan didn't go precisely as Legolas had thought, and now I wonder what Aragorn would do about it, it's simply good to see Tindome back where she belongs -- with the elves.

Giggled at the visual of the Els -- indeed, they must have looked kind of unusual to a human's eyes Wink smiley face

Great chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more Very Happy smiley face

Thank you!

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