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Sorcia
Joined: 16 Jan 2004
Reviews: 80
Location: Gods, Sean in glasses, how dishy
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Tue Apr 28, 2009 2:29 pm
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| Interesting notion on following Amroth! With your characterization of him, his story almost begged to be told. While he may have been a bit of the 'playboy', I think he is certainly going to find Devoran well worth the development of his patience and trust. Looking forward to more on this couple and their story. |
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| Author's replied on Thu Apr 30, 2009 1:10 pm |
| I have always had a soft spot for Amroth, and Duinhir going home without his son's has always pulled at my heart strings. So I just had to combine the two. Thanks a lot for reviewing.LBJ |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Tue Apr 28, 2009 3:13 pm
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| What an excellent start - I am so looking forward to this story already. |
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| Author's replied on Thu Apr 30, 2009 1:11 pm |
| Glad you like it, it's a little softer than the first part. Thanks very much for reviewing.LBJ |
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Sulriel
Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Tue Apr 28, 2009 10:22 pm
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| This is a wonderful little story, I'll definitely be watching for updates. I love your characterization of Amroth and am delighted with the balance of fragile strength you've managed to portray in Devoran |
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| Author's replied on Thu Apr 30, 2009 1:13 pm |
| Hi Sulriel, lovely you are reading. I am going for emotions in this one a bit. And a touch of Georgette Heyer. Hope you continue to enjoy.LBJ |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Mon May 04, 2009 3:07 pm
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| Lovely - I can see the sea spray and hear the hoof-beats! I do hope that they get together again quickly. |
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| Author's replied on Sun May 10, 2009 3:28 pm |
| I always like to include a gallop along the beach if I can! Glad you liked it. LBJ |
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brindlemom2
Joined: 12 May 2006
Reviews: 56
Location: New York
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Mon May 04, 2009 3:11 pm
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| As usual your character development is excellent. I always enjoy the way you make them very believable and involve them in situations appropriate to their world without making them characatures. Looking forward to their story. |
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| Author's replied on Sun May 10, 2009 3:29 pm |
| Thanks for your comments. Amorth and Devoran are two of my favourites.LBJ |
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lissaselves
Joined: 28 Dec 2007
Reviews: 42
Location: Right here!
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Mon May 04, 2009 4:37 pm
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Wonderful story - I can't wait to read more!
Amroth is perfect - Devoran doesn't have a chance, does she? 
Her recent family history is terribly sad. What did the bard sing? 'the tall bowmen, Derufin and Duilin' did not return to the meres of Morthond. |
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| Author's replied on Sun May 10, 2009 3:31 pm |
| I have always been a bit fixated on Duinhir's story, I seemed awful for him to go home without his sons and I mused on how his wife would react. Great you are reading, and thanks for commenting.LBJ |
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derakh
Joined: 20 Jun 2003
Reviews: 20
Location: Salem, Oregon
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Mon May 04, 2009 11:58 pm
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| I loved Tide of Destiny, and this one has me hooked as well. Love the character development, the descriptions, and am looking forward to more! |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Tue May 05, 2009 8:13 am
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| I enjoyed reading part one of this serie, and am very happy to see part two coming to life! You cast a nice input into the life of the otherwise relatively unknown characters. I like your portrayal of Amrothos. I'm eagerly waiting for more! |
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| Author's replied on Sun May 10, 2009 3:32 pm |
| I admit to being partial to the Amroth I created, so I had to give him his own story.Thanks a lot for commenting.LBJ |
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Sulriel
Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Wed May 13, 2009 12:27 pm
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>>“And now, Drummer, there is just you and me. But I will always remember the wonderful time I had with my Prince.”
You have me in tears.
in combination with this wonderful line: >>If she spoke about Amroth, he would seem real, not just a handsome hero who had passed through her dreams leaving her unsettled and wanting.
You so perfectly capture the depth of the pain and 'not-regret' in the emotion of a love touched on and lost before it could have a chance to be.
Another wonderful chapter and I'll be waiting even more anxiously for the next one. |
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| Author's replied on Mon May 18, 2009 1:45 pm |
| Had you in tears! Then I achieved what I intended. Thanks for that, Sulriel. The poor girl has a bit of a hard time ahead, |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Wed May 13, 2009 1:11 pm
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Such a sad chapter - so beautifully captured; the joy of having been together, the sadness that they are not together, and the sorrow that she cannot see that they ever will be.
I am glad that there will be a place for her at court - and fear that she may well have to take the King up on the offer all too soon. |
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| Author's replied on Mon May 18, 2009 1:46 pm |
| Well, she might. At least it is a way out for her if things get too difficult. Thanks very much for reviewing.LBJ |
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