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Aearwen2
Joined: 12 Jul 2008
Reviews: 7
Location: California Central Coast
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Wed May 13, 2009 11:49 pm
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O wow! What a treat!
We get to meet one of the characters about whom very little if anything is ever written - and you've done a beautiful job of setting up this romance. An excellent presentation of what a lonely *nice* girl would encounter after the war.
I'll be looking forward to your next update. Hope it will be soon. |
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| Author's replied on Mon May 18, 2009 1:48 pm |
| Thank you. Nice to have you along. Its true there are no winners in war, and many would have had there lives destroyed, like Devoran.LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu May 14, 2009 8:45 am
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| I'm always amazed by how REAL your characters seem, in every story you write. At the same time, I feel so sad for Devoran. I do hope she won't have to take the offer Aragorn had proposed for her, though the future would seem a bit bleak. I am fairly confident though that somehow, things will be right for her. I'll eagerly be waiting for the next chapter! |
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| Author's replied on Mon May 18, 2009 1:50 pm |
| Thank you. At least she has the option of somewhere to go if things get bad. Which it might, of course. LBJ |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Wed May 20, 2009 12:47 pm
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| Oh what a lovely chapter, with just the right balance of sadness and happiness. Poor Amroth - but I can't see him 'just going' somehow. |
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| Author's replied on Wed May 27, 2009 11:01 am |
Well, he has to do what a lady says. But there is a way to go yet!
Thanks for the review - I really appreciate it. LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu May 21, 2009 12:29 am
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| Oh, this is so sad! I knew it would be too easy if she simply accepted. Another reat chapter; I am growing to like Devoran more and more. Can't wait to read what comes next! |
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| Author's replied on Wed May 27, 2009 11:02 am |
Glad you like my Devoran. I have grown fond of her.
Thanks very much for taking the time to review.LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Sat May 30, 2009 2:25 am
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Another brilliant, if sad chapter. Poor Devoran! And Amroth! And I feel for Devoran's father, he really is horribly ill.
I enjoy the realism in your stories. Can't wait for the next chapter =) |
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| Author's replied on Sat May 30, 2009 11:52 am |
Yes, I am afraid he is. But as you say, very realistic.
Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat May 30, 2009 4:44 am
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Oh poor Devoran - you write them both so well, and the secodary characters like her cousin, that I want to hug them both, and kick the cousin firmly into touch.
I am worrying now about what will happen if her father dies... |
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| Author's replied on Sat May 30, 2009 11:53 am |
You are right to worry *grins*
Thanks very mich for reviewing. LBJ |
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Aearwen2
Joined: 12 Jul 2008
Reviews: 7
Location: California Central Coast
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Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:22 pm
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Wonderful chapter, LBJ! So sad, and yet, it was good to see that Devoran's father knew what was what and why Amroth had come. I hope that he finds out that the old lord has passed on soon, and comes to rescue Devoran before that creepy cousin gets a chance to pull any mischief!
-Aeärwen |
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| Author's replied on Mon Jun 01, 2009 3:06 pm |
No that would be too boring! I have to keep the creepy cousin for something!
Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Mon Jun 08, 2009 2:29 pm
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| Ah - I had a nasty feeling that cousin Alhael might have that planned - I am so glad that she remembered Aragorn's promise. |
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| Author's replied on Wed Jun 17, 2009 11:40 am |
| It's good she had somewhere to run - or is it? Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Tue Jun 09, 2009 1:09 am
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Right now I am very happy that Aragorn has a kind heart. Devoran will need his help.
Lovely chapter, as always, though I am sad to see her get into trouble. Alhael would need someone to teach him a lesson at some point.
I wonder, however, what Amroth will do when he comes up the Vale and doesn't find his lady love. Hmmm, best wait and find out! |
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| Author's replied on Wed Jun 17, 2009 11:41 am |
| I don't think he will be too happy. In fact I imagine he will be quite angry. Thanks for reviewing.LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu Jun 18, 2009 12:36 am
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Oh dear, why do I have the feeling Devoran's road to Minas Tirith shall be a long one?
I don't like the fact that she's without a cart or another horse. Hmmm.
Am keeping my fingers crossed for her, and am eager to read more! |
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| Author's replied on Thu Jun 25, 2009 6:15 am |
She certainly isn't going to get to Minas Tirith any time soon! Who knows what will happen on the road.
Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ |
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