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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Sun Jun 28, 2009 2:14 am
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Ah, the chase begins! I feel for Amroth, and his poor men - I doubt he'll let them have any proper rest soon! But I'm very happy about the exchange between the Dol Amroth Princes and Alhael. That man had it coming.
Can't wait to read more! |
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| Author's replied on Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:43 pm |
Alhael certainly had it coming. And Amroth will naturally want to make all speed.
Thanks for reviewing.LBJ |
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Sorcia

Joined: 16 Jan 2004 Reviews: 80
Location: Gods, Sean in glasses, how dishy
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Tue Jul 07, 2009 2:09 pm
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Another great chapter but I fear for Devoran at the end. While the romantic in me hopes for Amroth I know she will likely have to deal with some nasty people before he shows up!  |
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| Author's replied on Fri Jul 10, 2009 4:07 pm |
Well, you wouldn't want a boring story!
Thanks for reviewing. LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Wed Jul 15, 2009 3:36 am
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| Ah, finally! I was hoping I'd see Devoran saved when I returned from France. This was well worth not having time for the internet during my little trip. I'm very happy Amroth has finally caught up with Devoran, though I'm wondering just how this will all affect her. But, she's with the soldiers of Dol Amroth now, so I'm not too worried. Can't wait to read more! |
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| Author's replied on Sun Jul 26, 2009 7:22 am |
| Its bound to affect her a bit, I think. Glad you are enjoying. Thanks a lot for your review - it is really appreciated. Next chapter coming soon. LBJ |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sun Jul 26, 2009 10:41 am
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Oh - I am so glad that you were able to reach this point before Lia went on holiday!
How good to see Guleth again; how good, also, that no-one is ever likely to question the child's parentage - only Guleth is likely to know for sure whose son he is. |
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| Author's replied on Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:27 pm |
| Well, I know! But I am keeping stum until part three. LBJ |
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MMC
Joined: 04 Jan 2007 Reviews: 10
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Sun Jul 26, 2009 12:18 pm
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| Another lovely story. I am curious if Guleths son will come up in any future stories? |
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| Author's replied on Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:28 pm |
| I wanted to link the stories - so there will be a part for them to play, LBJ |
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004 Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Mon Jul 27, 2009 7:14 pm
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| Another wonderful chapter! It's delightful to see them finally together. |
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| Author's replied on Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:29 pm |
| Great you are still here. Life should improve for her from now on.LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Sat Aug 01, 2009 6:49 am
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Ah, success! They are finally together. I am very happy right now; this is just the balm for all my travel-gathered bruises.
I've really enjoyed the story so far and am looking forward to the final few chapters! |
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| Author's replied on Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:32 pm |
| Welcome back from where ever you have been! Just need to tie up the ends for them now. LBJ |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Mon Aug 17, 2009 5:10 pm
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| Lovely to see them get to Dol Amroth, and the lovely way Amroth handles her worries about providing her own wedding dress. I like the idea of Drummer already reaching the senior dog-rankings in Dol Amroth as well. |
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| Author's replied on Thu Aug 27, 2009 11:34 am |
| Drummer will have to be top dog, won't he. I couldn't have it any other way. LBJ |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Thu Aug 27, 2009 12:52 pm
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| Chapter 13 - lovely. How nice to see Éomer and Lothiriel again. i am looking forward so much to the next chapter - especially the modesty gown...but then I will be sad because it is the last one... |
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| Author's replied on Tue Sep 01, 2009 3:16 pm |
| Its always sad getting to the end of a story. But I will bring in a bit of Devoran and Amroth in part 3.LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu Aug 27, 2009 3:13 pm
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| These last few chapters haveb een lovely, you describe day-to-day life with such simplicity and to perfection! I love this story and I'll be sad when it ends, but I'm looking forward to the wedding. Devoran and Amroth deserve their happiness *nods* |
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| Author's replied on Tue Sep 01, 2009 3:17 pm |
| Don't worry, I like happy endings. LBJ |
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