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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Sat May 02, 2009 9:26 pm
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| Thank you for the sequel of Light Fingers. Ivoreth breaks my heart. This little one has been through so much. I just wish someone would give Elrohir a quick kick in the back end. I know there is a reason he's acting like this, but that doesn't mean I have to like it. Okay enough ranting....lol. Thanks again for the great chapter. |
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| Author's replied on Sun May 03, 2009 10:33 am |
I know that folks are wondering about my characterization of Elrohir. I believe that Elves experience their emotions much more strongly than do mortals - and that it isn't going to be a quick-fix to settle things between him and Ivoreth. You're right, something else is going on; and things are going to get worse before they get better. Ivoreth is just now starting to realize she knows nothing about Elves, and to feel very much isolated from all she has ever known - which is going to make her more sensitive and fragile. She's been in a bad place for so long, it's going to be hard for her to accept that her life is getting better.
Hang in there. This is going to be a roller-coaster ride for her. |
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Isabo
Joined: 01 Mar 2006
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Tue May 05, 2009 10:33 am
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| What a great chapter. I look forward to reading more about Ivoreth and her Ada. I hope her uncle will have a forgiving heart soon. Thanks |
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Annye
Joined: 07 Feb 2008
Reviews: 8
Location: Italy
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Thu May 07, 2009 10:16 am
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Yeah!!!!
I loved Light Fingers and I'm sure Elladaniel will be even better! |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sun May 24, 2009 7:24 am
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Poor little soul.
How beautifully you have written Galadriel, just as I imagine her to be. |
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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Thu May 28, 2009 4:30 pm
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| This chapter brought tears to my eyes. Fear and anger are nasty creatures, especially when they are thrown upon an innocent. I hope Galadriel and Celeborn can help Elrohir. Thank you for this wonderful written chapter |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat May 30, 2009 5:57 pm
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Ah - so we begin to see what the root of the problem is - trust the Grandmother to get to it - and the Grandfather.
I like 'daeradar 'too! |
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| Author's replied on Sat May 30, 2009 8:53 pm |
Yes, Elrohir really does have a reason for behaving like a jerk - and trust his grandparents to fix the problem.
Glad you're enjoying this. FWIW, updates will come more regularly now. |
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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Sat May 30, 2009 8:09 pm
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| Wouldn't life be wonderful if Galadriel and Celeborn were on your side. Ivoreth is blessed, even if she doesn't realize it yet. Thank you for the new chapter. |
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| Author's replied on Sat May 30, 2009 8:54 pm |
Hi there!
Glad you're enjoying this. Yes, Ivoreth is blessed - but it is going to take her quite a bit longer to actually believe. She's had a rough road to travel, and it ain't over yet. |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat Jun 06, 2009 5:45 pm
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Ah - I am glad that things between Elrohir and Elladan are sorted - and that there is some degree of understanding, in both directions, about what he had done to Ivoreth, and what is needed sometimes for an apology to be acceptable.
I really like the way you have written Galadriel and Celeborn - wise and caring. |
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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Sat Jun 06, 2009 10:43 pm
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| I have three sons. It seems that steam builds up between them once in a while. It's rare, but when the explosion happens, peace reigns once again. I now understand Elladan and Elrohir. Hopefully Ivoreth will be able to release her anger and find a bit of peace. |
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| Author's replied on Sat Jun 13, 2009 7:39 pm |
| LOL! I have a daughter 2 years older than twin sons. I know how those kinds of dynamics work, trust me! |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:49 pm
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| Oh dear - it is going to take her a long time yet, poor little one. |
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| Author's replied on Sat Jun 13, 2009 7:38 pm |
| It *is* going to take her a while yet, yes. She has a lot of hurts and scars to heal. And Elves are just so different from what she's used to... |
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