Reviews for "Killing Time"
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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Tue May 05, 2009 5:12 pm
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| That's *sick*. In a total I-dig-it-so-much way. I can't believe you snuck in twists like that in such a short piece. Focus on her muscle groups was a nice clue, and "from the south." hee. |
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| Author's replied on Tue May 05, 2009 6:00 pm |
>>sick
*giggles*
Thank you Viv. This was fun to write. I've gotten a lot of mileage out of it and hoped people here would enjoy it as well.  |
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RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Fri May 29, 2009 3:43 pm
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| Ah, this was good. Creepy... Very good! |
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| Author's replied on Fri May 29, 2009 6:31 pm |
| Creepy is good!! Thank you for reading!! I'm excited to have the original archive here and hope it sees a lot of activity. |
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dolarabee
Joined: 22 Apr 2003
Reviews: 35
Location: Sydney, Australia
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Sat May 30, 2009 1:17 am
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Ooh, nasty! Nasty piece of work! LOL Well done. You kept me wondering.  |
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| Author's replied on Sat May 30, 2009 9:18 am |
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you ...um .. is 'enjoyed' the right word?!?
I played with a lot of different twistings of the twist at the end and decided to go 'simple'. I'm glad it worked for you. |
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breemon
Joined: 23 Jan 2010
Reviews: 3
Location: A moonlit dew-kissed hill
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Wed Feb 03, 2010 4:18 pm
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| Wow, that was really great! I like the way you make her inhuman right away with the counting so that when you throw in the shape-shifting thing it just clicks. I think my favorite thing is definitely how everything just ties together so nicely. Your character also left an impression but I can't put my finger as to the reason. |
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| Author's replied on Thu Feb 04, 2010 2:19 pm |
| Thanks! I'm so glad you picked up all the nuances. They were fun to weave in. |
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