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daydreamer4495
Joined: 14 Sep 2003
Reviews: 1
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Mon Dec 29, 2003 11:39 pm
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Hey! 
I really like it! I reallly hope that you write more.
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Anorliriel
Joined: 11 Dec 2003
Reviews: 16
Location: Southern California
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Wed Dec 31, 2003 2:46 am
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| Liking Legolas better now. Looking forward to more.Can't wait. Edit fast.PLEEAASSE!!! |
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SilentTears
Joined: 24 Jul 2003
Reviews: 23
Location: Mirkwood
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Thu Jan 01, 2004 12:21 am
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| Wow now i dont dislike lariella so much anymore... she finally wasnt as mean to legolas this time.. great job... i cant wait for you to continue. I just hope that she will stop being so mean to legolas... i mean she is nice to dill from the start and who cares if he over slept.. someone did escort her to the ball or whatever... anyway please hurry and update.. this story has major potential and is very good... she seems very ungreatful .... i just consider her to be the villain on the story... i cant spell oh well... but i love the way you portray legolas... |
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BellaRue
Joined: 11 Nov 2003
Reviews: 14
Location: Las Vegas
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Thu Jan 15, 2004 2:45 pm
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| OOh... Sounds good... Post more please! |
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Laereth
Joined: 13 Dec 2003
Reviews: 16
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Tue Jan 20, 2004 3:02 pm
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It's a nice story, don't mind reading MS once in a while 
Be so kind and update pls |
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kimmaree
Joined: 21 Jun 2003
Reviews: 4
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Sun Jan 25, 2004 1:14 am
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Hi there
I have just found this story and was able to read the first 10 chapters all at once. Now I have come to a grinding halt and have to just sit back and wait for more........ 
Good work & I eagerly await the rest of the story.....
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Anorliriel
Joined: 11 Dec 2003
Reviews: 16
Location: Southern California
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Sun May 16, 2004 12:40 pm
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May I start with Forgiveness is yours for the time you have taken between submitting chapters... well at least as far as I am concerned. RL does have a way of getting in the way at times *grin* I hope that all will calm down for you soon and you will be able to write more and at a pace that is comfortable to you and pleasing to me...
Enough said of that... I enjoyed the byplay between the two characters in this last part you have written... as a bridge between the part that you had written before and that which is to come... I had fun reading it. A fine bridge as far as I am concerned. But I am not an accomplished writer as some here and can only speak for myself. |
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Lunamoonsong
Joined: 10 Dec 2003
Reviews: 5
Location: USA
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Tue Jul 06, 2004 10:51 am
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| I do hope you will continue the story. I like reading things that are different from the original story line. I plan on going back & re reading the beginning again. Then I might have an idea of where to go. |
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Lunamoonsong
Joined: 10 Dec 2003
Reviews: 5
Location: USA
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Tue Aug 03, 2004 8:31 pm
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| I would prefer that you keep Dills name. IT will keep it simpler. And thanks for getting this one out!! I love it - plot twist. What will happen at lunch? don't keep us in suspence for to long. |
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Mavyan
Joined: 01 Jun 2004
Reviews: 9
Location: N.E. England
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Sun Aug 22, 2004 2:04 pm
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I've enjoyed reading this fic... tis v. gud!
Go oon... post the next chapter... u know u want to! |
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