Reviews for "Blue Eyes"

Wed Jan 05, 2005 2:17 am

Wow... This is a great story! I would love to see the pics of her dress and hairstyle. I hope you update soon I want to know more about the relationships!!! please hurry! Wink smiley face

Thu Feb 17, 2005 11:13 pm

An enjoyable premise that I would like to see continue. Don't let life's many demands push your writing out of the way. Allow yourself the time to escape...

Thu Feb 24, 2005 6:19 pm

I would be more than happy to Beta for you.... If you could tell me what you want and need from one. And if I can'tdo it, I will be honest with you. I do not flake out (I am almost 35...)

Luna Smile smiley face

Thu Feb 24, 2005 6:56 pm

now to review....

I loved it!! Surprised smiley face

I so look forward to more chapters. I like that there is something brewing... something more to the plot. Something that I want to see played out. Thumb smiley face

Thu Feb 24, 2005 9:59 pm

I loved your story. You hardly need a Beta for I found only one small mistake. And that mistake will more like go missed by most. But if you still are in need of a beta, I will gladly be one. Your word choice has made the story more interesting and accurate. I love how the plot is unpredictable, unlike many other stories. Continue writing the story. I look forward to future chapters.

Sat Feb 26, 2005 3:32 am

I have several comments for this one.

You tend to overdescribe people, clothes, and places. Otherwise this is not that bad a Mary Sue. If you need a beta, you can always go to the forums and find one, that's how I found mine! *wuvs beta* I noted that as this story went along, your writing improved, so it's a good thing, although I've yet to finish your story.

Keep on writing Smile smiley face

Tue Mar 01, 2005 12:14 pm

Loved it! I like the images that come to my mind - when you describe peoples reactions and such. And I am glad Leirella & Legolas are talking again. Smile smiley face

Tue Mar 01, 2005 2:31 pm

Well this just keeps getting better and better! I can't wait for the next chapter! Smile smiley face

Fri May 26, 2006 1:29 pm

Hi! I just started reading your story yesterday and am on chp9(or was it 10?) Anyways I expect to finish it by today. I have read entire stories in a couple of days like yours. In one case it was in a couple of hours all chp 19 of them. When I read a story that really interest me and grabs me in its story I can't put it down. When I first heard about "Lord of The Rings" I was interested and decided to read all four books: A Hobbits Tale, The fellowship, The Two Towers and Return of the King! I tell you the moment I started reading the first one I was "Sold" to the stories. I read all four books in little over a week(Whew!) Then proceeded to watch each movie as they came out. Also bought the movies( the large unedited editions) too! That was alot! I am now reading the "Silmarilion" by JRR Tolkien. I hope Peter Jackson decides to make a movie out of that one too and the Hobbits Tale. I can't wait for this other movie about elves (from a different producer) to come out! That one is called Ancanar. But anyways your stories fit in with all the stories I have read so far "EXCELLANT!"Keep up the good work and hurry up with the updates I can't stant it(lol) Laughing smiley face

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Wed May 31, 2006 8:20 pm

I am sorry you are going through a very hard time right now, but I think writing can get one out of the dumps as does sewing(I sew for my grandchildren who are native american dancers at powwow's) You don't have to run and finish this story is not what I mean't but like in a journal. Like in one of your stories, you know the one with the white hair and crimson eyes. She wrote in her journal about her personal day to day things that would happen to her or happy times. In your story it seemed to help out. There are alot of us who have gone through the same things you have gone through in their lives, so..they understand, they are family whether internet or not. Somehow I know things will get better, if you let it! But I love your stories you have written here so far...especially "Blue Eyes" Keep up the good work and keep on truckin(ha ha) No Just keep your spirits up and know that it isn't crazy sounding to say your readers are your family too! Their are here reading aren't they and reviewing and haven't left. Heart smiley face

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