Joined: 03 Mar 2009 Reviews: 2
Location: Midwestern USA
Fri Jul 10, 2009 11:19 pm
Well Done!
A wonderfully evocative piece of prose, with brooding imagery and stark, violent action. Interesting dialogue and colorful descriptive passages.
And exciting and captivating work!
Author's replied on Sat Jul 11, 2009 11:21 am
EdgeofDark. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. This was a fun piece to plot and write. It's been 'round the block a few times with wildly mixed reviews! But I love it and am delighted to read in your generous review that you found it worthwhile!
RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Fri Oct 30, 2009 9:40 am
Great job! I started reading and didn't know just when I reached the end. This is a remarkable story. Your writing style is engaging and strong, which I admire to bits.
Author's replied on Fri Oct 30, 2009 2:59 pm
Thank you so much for reading and for letting me know you enjoyed this story!! It's good to see this archive, and this story, getting a little attention. It was a fun story to write and I'm glad to be able to share it.