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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Wed Jun 03, 2009 11:17 am
This leaves me with a hundred questions, like: who they are, why they're dancing around each other, what's the mission... Curious here, very curious Smile smiley face

Nicely done! Thank you.
 

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Last edited by dolarabee on Wed Jun 10, 2009 5:09 am
Author's replied on Wed Dec 31, 1969 7:00 pm
I do hope I'll be able to expand on this. A lot of it is in my head but I just can't seem to get it down on paper. Maybe one day. Thanks so much for your review.
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Mon Jun 08, 2009 9:01 am
Oh YUM! This definitely needs to be part of something much longer!
 

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Last edited by dolarabee on Wed Jun 10, 2009 5:10 am
Author's replied on Wed Dec 31, 1969 7:00 pm
Thanks, Sulriel. Maybe one day I'll get it done!
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EdgeOfDark

Joined: 03 Mar 2009
Reviews: 2
Location: Midwestern USA
Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:58 pm
Very nice!

Excellent imagery and prose. East to read, easy to enjoy, and leaves one wanting more!

Good work!
 

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Last edited by dolarabee on Fri Jul 24, 2009 1:01 am
Author's replied on Wed Dec 31, 1969 7:00 pm
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. Smile smiley face
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
Wed Jan 27, 2010 8:16 pm
This leaves me yearning for more. You build the tension beautifully. I want to know both what happened before and what happens next!
 
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