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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:08 am
I'm familiar with the movies, and I haven't seen the TV series, but it doesn't keep me from enjoying the insight into a terminator's mind you've created here. Very nicely done!
 

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Last edited by RobinKa on Thu Jul 23, 2009 6:50 am
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:49 pm
This was really great, Viv. You set up a paradigm comparing the machine with the human and keep it up proviing great structure without letting it drive the narrative at tall. I particularly liked how, at the end, she is still a woman: giving her man an ultimatum he is unaware of and so must ultimately fail.
 
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
Thu Jul 30, 2009 7:43 pm
This is wonderful, Viv. I love the man/machine comparisons. The ending is so gut wrenching. You know how to make the words stab me, don't ya! Great piece.
 
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oxnate69
Joined: 15 Feb 2014
Reviews: 3
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Sat Feb 15, 2014 6:37 pm
Excellent contrast of human vs machine strengths and weaknesses.
 
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