Reviews for "Gamemaster"
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RilleElen
Joined: 05 Sep 2006 Reviews: 27
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Sun Aug 30, 2009 12:03 pm
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while the in-text (by which i mean, the parts that weren't just long lists of materials, technologies, and whatnot) were very enjoyable and engrossing, the aforementioned long lists were rather distracting. i personally would remove them, as they do not seem to add anything to the story.
however, this is your story, and i can only advise.
that being said, which version of Civilization were you basing the ministers, their sayings, and...really, the entire game, off of? i'm a bit of a fan myself.  |
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