Reviews for "Along Came A Spider"
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004 Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
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Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:24 pm
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| I've already said this before but this is beautifully written. I found myself feeling sorry for her which I never thought I would do. |
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| Author's replied on Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:45 pm |
| Thanks, Al. I grew to understand her a whole lot more myself. |
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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004 Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
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Sun Sep 27, 2009 5:20 pm
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What a compelling look at Tolkien's creation myth - I'm rather fond of the idea of the great Music myself, and really like the way you embellished on it here.... But I never, ever, ever, ever (did I mention ever?) thought that I could feel compassion for the Gloomweaver!
Very well done, Aearwen!
- Barbara |
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| Author's replied on Wed Sep 30, 2009 10:44 am |
Thanks!
I never thought I'd be writing a story from HER point of view, trust me! I have accused Pandemonium_213 of sicc'ing her Dark Muse on me, something she just laughs at and tells me that this would be precisely what her Dark Muse would be capable of.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and thanks for the review. |
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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004 Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
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Sat Oct 10, 2009 11:38 pm
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*shiver*
Oh, my, Aerwen.... You sure know how to get the creepiest heart of a major creepy crawly.....
I enjoy how you play out her suspicions versus what she says to Morgoth; he was soooo not expecting someone with opinions of her own!
Well done!
- Barbara |
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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004 Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
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Sun Oct 18, 2009 8:43 am
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Eeeeek.
Contemplating how big and ugly -- and angry -- she has become, I'm rather sorry I just ate....
Feeling rather ill now.
Melkor and Ungoliant must surely deserve each other?
Well done, Aerwen!
- Barbara
P.S. And I bet Melkor finally understands just how much he underestimated her.... It's really too bad the jerk had balrogs at his disposal. What a bummer! |
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